David Lombardino | DLA Editors — Editorial & Consulting Reviews 

David’s review is very thorough and thoughtful. I may not like what he says at first because it goes against what I’ve written, but after our discussion I know his ideas are better for the book I want to write. He wants my work to be the best I can do, and I trust him on that.

David Lombardino took a rush job from me and did a very thorough developmental edit. I incorporated many of his edits and I think my work is much better for it. Thank you David!

David did what he was supposed to do with reviewing my query letter, and with that he did a good job. What I did not like was his comment about my word count. "This sounds high for this story." How does that affect my query letter? I'm not going to lie about my word count. That's a pretty stupid thing to lie about when it can be checked immediately upon sending a manuscript. It was disparaging and unnecessary. Also, his email sending out the reviewed document stated to reach out to him with any questions and he would return the email by the next business day. It's been over a week and I have not heard back. I would not use his services again.

David is an amazing editor! His whole crew is great. I have been sending my work for editing for almost 15 years. The turnaround time is fast, and their comments are spot on! I highly recommend DLA Editors. Thank you for making my writing SING.

Joan

David was very insightful and most importantly, he was honest and excellent at catching small details which I feel like is the biggest reason you hire an editor.

David offered timely and helpful advice and edits on a letter of recommendation I was writing. I would recommend his services to others.

DLA always performs excellent work. Their comments are valuable both from a technical and qualitative standpoint. I've worked with them for over 10 years and highly recommend.

David provided enormously helpful feedback on my draft manuscript. This included many general and substantive comments to improve the plot, clarify the character arc, and keep the reader engaged, as well as numerous detailed suggestions for tightening the narrative. David is really meticulous and thinks about how every sentence and paragraph might be improved, ways to make every part of the plot more convincing, and creative ways of conveying information to the reader. He also provides useful references illustrating how to sharpen story telling. I appreciate his timely responsiveness to questions over email.

David was exceptional to work with. His attention to detail is on another level. He didn’t just correct grammar or polish sentences, he elevated the entire manuscript. Every suggestion was thoughtful, precise, and clearly rooted in a deep understanding of structure, tone, and narrative flow.

What stood out most was the value add. David approached the project like a true partner, not just an editor. He strengthened arguments, sharpened themes, and helped clarify ideas without ever diluting my voice. The end result is materially better because of his involvement.

If you are looking for an editor who brings rigor, insight, and genuine investment in your work, I highly recommend him.

I am unhappy with the editing style feedback. Namely, the format is not designed for 1st time writers, hard to decipher and rather intimidating. I have tried to the open communicating however it is is a non motivator and the drag it was to lose an entire chapter the way the app is set up has derailed me from wanting to write it again. Overall, I would prefer someone that is open to communication and free to ask questions without the fear of getting a bill on top of the re-editing fee.

The reviews were very helpful in streamlining my application

it was a good experience. Provided me with good feedback and guidance about my Personal statement.

They use chat gpt or other AI tool to concise your PS.
The service they provide that can be easily done by your colleagues also.
Nothing special.

David Lombardino is very professional. I recommend him highly!

The edit was completed on time and was thorough.

It was a very thorough edit and feedback. I can recommend your services wholeheartedly.

Very thorough and sensitive to my concern about maintaining my writer’s voice.

The communication between me and the company was very fast. The response time of the editor in chief was amazing, helpful and friendly.

David is amazing at what he does! He is a genius when it comes to wording and phrasing.